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collapsing, clouds of dust
breathed in (and out) of worn sheets
as you wake to the morning
the fourth morning in a row-
alone, empty of virtues (& vices)
comfort
takes the shape of a girl
in white, & leads her to bed
comfort takes the form of
second hand sadness & smoke,
cold sheets beside you by dawn,
never a name, never a number,
sometimes not even more than a
hazy frame or two that wears
down your back as
the sun gets higher, then lower
in the sky.
--
emergency situations
cripple a nation
if they're big enough
but it's the small tragedies
that keep us up
night after night,
years later
breathed in (and out) of worn sheets
as you wake to the morning
the fourth morning in a row-
alone, empty of virtues (& vices)
comfort
takes the shape of a girl
in white, & leads her to bed
comfort takes the form of
second hand sadness & smoke,
cold sheets beside you by dawn,
never a name, never a number,
sometimes not even more than a
hazy frame or two that wears
down your back as
the sun gets higher, then lower
in the sky.
--
emergency situations
cripple a nation
if they're big enough
but it's the small tragedies
that keep us up
night after night,
years later
the title has nothing to do with anything.
surprise, right?
i don't know if i want to split up the two sections, or keep them together.
thoughts?
NaPo Day 5
Edit 17 April 2013- Fixed a typo pointed out by *bloodawni
Edit 19 April 2013- Featured here by #The-Asterismos
Edit 28 April 2013- Recieved a DLD on 23 April 2013 thanks to =TwilightPoetess I think.
surprise, right?
i don't know if i want to split up the two sections, or keep them together.
thoughts?
NaPo Day 5
Edit 17 April 2013- Fixed a typo pointed out by *bloodawni
Edit 19 April 2013- Featured here by #The-Asterismos
Edit 28 April 2013- Recieved a DLD on 23 April 2013 thanks to =TwilightPoetess I think.
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gosh, you are always so very lovely.
congratulations on the well-deserved DLD, darling!
congratulations on the well-deserved DLD, darling!